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Words by jSiAgWsVaIwI, literature

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Words

I want to write a poem. A nice, beautiful poem about pain and anguish and self-loathing, With long enticing metaphors That capture spirit, heart and soul. But what is there to write when I can't see Or hear my thoughts Within this clouded mind? What words are there to say? Which letters could replace the beauty Of a peaceful silence that should rule my head? What words could I possibly use When what I mean to say Is that i should have kept My big mouth shut?

The Weeping Skies by jSiAgWsVaIwI, literature

Flesh and Blood by jSiAgWsVaIwI, literature

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Flesh and Blood

"Good evening Mr. Gray," she squeaked, covering her chest with her hand, as if she were on the verge of having a heart attack. Her high-pitched giggle seemed to emit ultrasonic rays, piercing my ear drums. It was unbearable. "Good evening to you too, Lady Michelin," I replied, removing my hat and giving her a slight bow, "Is Miss Evelyn at home?" "Why yes, Mr. Gray! She has been expecting you. Let me lead you to the drawing room. I'll have Betsy bring you some cakes and tea." "It's alright, Lady Michelin. I just want to speak to Miss Evelyn." "Oh, never you mind!" she squeaked, as she led me inside and closed the door behind me, "A gentle

Essence of a Writer by PhantomHarleyQuinn, literature

Questions of the Heart by PhantomHarleyQuinn, literature

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Questions of the Heart

My soul is restless My body lies still Thinking, deciding What's truly my will Working towards something Not sure what it is Where am I going? Is there more than this? As I wait in youth Combine work and play To love what is now Not wish it away What will be my future? With whom will it be? For I must be true To what's best for me And not overthink For I can-not help What others will say I must stay my self Not worry so much We all know in time How your life will be And what will be mine

Her Name Is Sorrow by PhantomHarleyQuinn, literature

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Her Name Is Sorrow

By day, the goddess of solitude takes hold By night, she lets me slumber When daybreak comes she hovers closely above Her eyes of cherry ember A Cheshire grin deceives the minds of mortals Subtle succubus, she is With poison, her caress is sweet but blinding Her lips, a brief, burning kiss Face of harshest depth and alabaster stone Body like a fading corpse Nails are jagged slats of freshly sharpened blades Never showing, her remorse Her glance, though enticing, proves fatal when seen She hides away until she strikes Draining life from victims once weakness is known Piercing hearts with sorrowed pikes Once caught, morbid thou

Up Above by MagicalJoey, literature

More Than a Year by MagicalJoey, literature

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More Than a Year

More Than a Year 28-11-11 It's been more than a year since I last saw you; your picture sits on my shelf coated in cobwebs - but I cannot bear to look, cannot bear to see what I lost. Your heartbeat is stuck in my mind like a thorn in a shoe - poking through at inconvenient times. I remember the little pulsing bean, and the thought that this was my little bean who was going to grow into a fine human-bean. It was not to be. Singed into my memory is the day your little pulse flickered off - the day that you died; the last day I saw your picture. I miss you - you were the spark that ignited my love and burned my relastionsh

Happily in Heaven by MagicalJoey, literature

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Happily in Heaven

Happily in Heaven 27-11-11 My thoughts of you Ebb and flow like the tide, Yet you are never far from my heart. I wonder what you would have looked like… …my nose? His eyes? You would have taken the best of us And made it uniquely you. My love for you Is still as wide as the wall Around my soul – you Slipped through the cracks And landed straight in my heart. I often wonder things about you: Would you have been stubborn, Like your parents. Would you have wormed your way Into his heart, although He swore he could never love you. You are still my child, even though I will only meet you when I pass through He

Too Harsh...Too Late. by Daisy-May-Rippingale, literature

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Zurthuryx

Feb 8, 2014

Hello fellow deviants! Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone and I have finished revising the entire first novel, Adventure Arc the First: Entity of Ascendancy, in the action/adventure/dark fantasy series "Darkquisition." We changed dialogue, extended scenes, and even created entirely new scenes. It's longer than the first version, but it’s better. We feel that this version is the definitive one so far. However, we feel it could be even better. But in order to do that, we need your help. We'd greatly appreciate it if some people could read it and give us constructive feedback. The only way we're going to progress as writers is if we get useful and helpful reviews of our works by readers. We sincerely thank you all for reading our posting. Forge on! Headbang!

Zurthuryx

Nov 27, 2012

Hello everybody! The revised versions of the first five chapters of "Adventure Arc the First: Entity of Ascendancy" in the Darkquisition series are in FeelFreeLetItOut's gallery for your reading pleasure. If you haven't read any of them, now's the perfect time. Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone and I went back into them and changed dialogue, added description, took description out, extended scenes, fixed continuity problems, and fixed spelling and grammer errors. We feel that they're superior to the previous versions, and we hope you do to. Remeber, the Darkquisition series is for readers eighteen years of age and older. Thank you.

Zurthuryx

Oct 18, 2012

Attention everyone! We are going to upload revised chapters for Adventure Arc the First: Entity of Ascendancy from the Darkquisition series. The first one is in our gallery and FeelFreeLetItOut's right now. We will try to upload a new one every Thursday just like we had done in the past. Please go and check them out. We thank you for your time.

Zurthuryx

Sep 27, 2012

Since this is a Thursday, you're probably expecting us to upload a new chapter to our gallery and/or FeelFreeLetItOut's like we've been doing since we first joined Deviant Art. However, we're not doing that today. I, Zürthüryx Hemtolig Qosdarlu, and my co-forger, Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone are working on something secret instead. Because of that, we won't be uploading a new chapter for the next couple of weeks. When we're finished, we'll let you all know what it is. Feel free to check out the first twelve chapters in the Darkquisition series in our gallery or FeelFreeLetItOut's until then if you haven't already. Thank you!

jSiAgWsVaIwI

Sep 28, 2012

Hi Zurthuryx, I'm sorry for not giving you any feedback and for not replying to any of your comments. I have accepted all of the chapters, but I have only read the first one. The reason for this is not because it isn't interesting - it was beautifully written and I enjoyed it

- but because I'm currently very very very very very very very busy working on my own book series. I just finished the second book about three weeks ago and am working on my third one. It isn't published and I highly doubt that I will find someone interested in publishing it, but I love it and I'm currently constantly writing. This is why I haven't given you feedback. I promise, I will soon make some time to read all of your chapters

Zurthuryx

Sep 24, 2012

I, Zürthüryx Hemtolig Qosdarlu, and Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone's 2nd chapter of "Adventure Arc the Second: Lifelessness, Deathlessness, and Mysteriousness" in the Darkquisition series is now in FeelFreeLetItOut's gallery for you all to read. It’s the twelfth chapter in the series. Please remember that it's for people 18+ for very good reasons. Reading our ebook requires one to leave their comfort zone and think and act like an adult. We treat our readers as grown-up who can handle all types of not very common, serious, and unsetting subject matter. Now, with that out of the way, please go and read it. If you’ve read this chapter, or any of the other ones in the series, both Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone and I’d really appreciate it if you could please write some comments about it. We really want to know what other readers think about the Darkquisition series thus far. If you’d like to learn more about Darkquisition, or even us, the forgers, for some reason, please visit the official Darkquisition website @ www.thejyreqldeikone.wix.com/darkquisition. We sincerely thank you for your time and interest. Keep on a reading!

Zurthuryx

Sep 15, 2012

I, Zürthüryx Hemtolig Qosdarlu, and Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone's 1st chapter of "Adventure Arc the Second: Lifelessness, Deathlessness, and Mysteriousness" in the Darkquisition series is now in FeelFreeLetItOut's gallery for you all to read. It’s the eleventh chapter in the series. Please remember that it's for people 18+ for reasons that you’re already aware of. Reading our ebook requires you to step outside your comfort zone and think and act maturely. We treat our readers as adults who can handle all types of uncommon, serious, and unpleasing topics. Now, with that out of the way, please go and read it. If you have read this chapter, or any of the other ones in the series, both Thejyreq Vazgothicus Ldeikone and I’d really appreciate it if you could please leave some comments about it. We really want to know what others think about the Darkquisition series thus far. If you’d like to learn more about Darkquisition, or even us, the forgers, for that matter, please don't wait to visit the official Darkquisition website @ www.thejyreqldeikone.wix.com/darkquisition. We sincerely thank you for your time and interest. Keep on reading!